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I FORGOT HER NAME

Have you ever fallen in love at first sight?
Have you ever had that love returned?
It was long ago for me.
I got turned around, lost track of reality.

She stood before me, hair languishingly riding the wind.
Her body shadowed by the horizon.
I met her arms with mine,
wishing this moment eternal.

I had no recollection of feeling this way.
My sorrows and hardships melted away.
I felt totally relaxed and safe in her arms.
She felt the same way.

We put our everything into each other.
It just wasn't meant to last.
A blinding light, and a roaring noise overcame me.

I sat up, looking around for her.
I realized, really rued, reality.

Tried my best, to hold onto the threads,
the memories that bound me to her.
Intangible, a fool's errand.
With each passing day, I forgot more,
and more.

No longer can I recall her face.
No longer can I recall her voice.
No longer can I recall her sway.

All that remains is a fragment.
A fragment of a far off dream.
I remember her hair, her embrace.
But a testament to the fool I am.

No longer can I recall her name.
©2008-2009 *NightVagabond
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Writing this, I've come full circle. I still can't remember.

Thanks to ~Nirem for helping me edit!

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wow. that must be....a hard thing to deal with..truely...

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love isnt finding someone who you can be with,

love is finding someone you cant be without.
It nags on me a bit. But I truly can't remember, what can I do?

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The lion within, I roar.
Stretch bow, let arrow soar.
To protect your love.
i have no idea...i dont think ive been in a situtation like this...but if it were me...no i dont think thats a good idea..nvm

im sorry

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love isnt finding someone who you can be with,

love is finding someone you cant be without.
Don't worry, its an old dream that kept me going during the hard times.

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The lion within, I roar.
Stretch bow, let arrow soar.
To protect your love.
...you could lucid dream

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love isnt finding someone who you can be with,

love is finding someone you cant be without.
lucid dream?

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The lion within, I roar.
Stretch bow, let arrow soar.
To protect your love.
its when you control dreams...never heard of it...not many have...


i lucid dream and every night i have the ending the same...

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love isnt finding someone who you can be with,

love is finding someone you cant be without.
I'll pass on repeating the ending...

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The lion within, I roar.
Stretch bow, let arrow soar.
To protect your love.
:\ i would to

but the begginings are never good for me...just the end..and thats only because i MAKE myself dream a good ending

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love isnt finding someone who you can be with,

love is finding someone you cant be without.
I wouldn't know how to make a good enough ending...plus I don't remember enough details to re-enact the dream.

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The lion within, I roar.
Stretch bow, let arrow soar.
To protect your love.

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