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Reluctant Flight by ~NightVagabond:iconNightVagabond:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Haiku & Eastern


touching, singing

my heart races being near

I pull you towards...

no longer am I able!

I turn my back, run away
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Submitted: April 25
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I just couldn't stay. Nature called, you know.

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*orphicfiddler:iconorphicfiddler: Apr 25, 2008, 10:08:26 AM
I like your comments on this one. Proufound, pretty little poem - and then the humor. Makes me smile. :)
~13norwitch:icon13norwitch: Apr 25, 2008, 11:21:12 AM
hahaha?

i love the poem...the comment...it throws me of balance o.o

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"Neutrality helps the oppressor, never the victim. Silence encourages the tormentor, never the tormented. Sometimes we must interfere. When human lives are in danger, when human dignity is in jeopardy, borders and sensitivities become irrelevant."
~NightVagabond:iconNightVagabond: Apr 25, 2008, 1:01:59 PM
Thank you :bow:

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The lion within, I roar
I stretch my bow, let arrow soar,
to protect your love.
~NightVagabond:iconNightVagabond: Apr 25, 2008, 1:02:39 PM
Don't pay attention to the comment then :D

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The lion within, I roar
I stretch my bow, let arrow soar,
to protect your love.
~13norwitch:icon13norwitch: Apr 25, 2008, 1:03:43 PM
lol alright i wont :D i like it

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"Neutrality helps the oppressor, never the victim. Silence encourages the tormentor, never the tormented. Sometimes we must interfere. When human lives are in danger, when human dignity is in jeopardy, borders and sensitivities become irrelevant."
~NightVagabond:iconNightVagabond: Apr 25, 2008, 1:04:42 PM
Then yay :D

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The lion within, I roar
I stretch my bow, let arrow soar,
to protect your love.
~13norwitch:icon13norwitch: Apr 25, 2008, 1:05:10 PM
lol yay! ^-^

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"Neutrality helps the oppressor, never the victim. Silence encourages the tormentor, never the tormented. Sometimes we must interfere. When human lives are in danger, when human dignity is in jeopardy, borders and sensitivities become irrelevant."
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